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I got some more free time today, so I used some of the good crits I got here and elsewhere--hit shift-reload if you don't see the changes!
Anyway, here's what I changed:
* Made larger the left hand which people said was too small
* Someone said it looked like that hand should be holding something, and someone else said that a picture like this needed at least SOME blood, so I gave her a bloody cloth wrapped around that hand.
* Added some refinement to nose-bridge area to fix my lighting
* Fixed folds on cloth on outstretched arm to make the arm position more clear.
Well, I WAS working, but then my flatmate's loud son arrived, making concentration impossible. So I decided to mess around and do something else instead. A while ago, I did a self-portrait called "The Vendetta" ( [link] ), but I wasn't very pleased with it. It didn't even look like me all that much. So I decided to make a new one.
"It was a real blood-feud, the kind where you're not happy till your enemy's guts lie in an interesting tangle at your feet...."
Anyway, here's what I changed:
* Made larger the left hand which people said was too small
* Someone said it looked like that hand should be holding something, and someone else said that a picture like this needed at least SOME blood, so I gave her a bloody cloth wrapped around that hand.
* Added some refinement to nose-bridge area to fix my lighting
* Fixed folds on cloth on outstretched arm to make the arm position more clear.
Well, I WAS working, but then my flatmate's loud son arrived, making concentration impossible. So I decided to mess around and do something else instead. A while ago, I did a self-portrait called "The Vendetta" ( [link] ), but I wasn't very pleased with it. It didn't even look like me all that much. So I decided to make a new one.
"It was a real blood-feud, the kind where you're not happy till your enemy's guts lie in an interesting tangle at your feet...."
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This is great! But one little thing is bothering me: the white in this pic could be a little more darker. Now it´s "jumping out" too much. I hope you can receive some critic too